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Vye Brante, 31 Jan 2008 12:53 am

We just got her back but . . .
Already, it looks like Hani may not be able to color pages for a while. She'll be busy with school and stuff. But it happens. Just hope you don't mind my horrible coloring jobs for a little while. I know I'll miss hers!

Readers of this comic that don't read Just Gotta, (there are at least a few out there, I think,) won't understand the significance of the second panel. Heh, we'll see every one else's reactions though.

Giovanni! Mwahahaha! At least I hope it's obvious that's who that is. Hani did a nice job with the shadow, but I didn't do a very good job at drawing him. I've only drawn him twice so far, so you'll have to forgive me. Blane still sucks after all, so Giovanni needs some time.

Blaine is almost done with his story. Seems like he's been telling it for a long time, but that's just because I'm so slow at getting these pages up. He's actually rushing through the story quite fast if read all together. Hope it all makes sense.




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Joshua, 31 Jan 2008 01:30 pm


GASP! CELEBI! The woman trained Celebi... Could it be- *shot* Yay, first time I ever did that! ... Yes! First user comment!


Vye Brante, 31 Jan 2008 02:20 pm

Heh, nice!
Congrats on the first comment! And yeah, she had a Celebi. What could it mean?


Sam4books, 31 Jan 2008 03:59 pm


I think it might be that old women in the Celebi movie.....but that's just me, she might be that other girl (can't remember her name).


Oranges_and_Pears, 31 Jan 2008 06:42 pm


Hmm, who could the woman be? Intruiging!


Vye Brante, 01 Feb 2008 12:56 pm


Sam4books: Mm, same problem as the problems with Amber listed on the last page, but another nice guess. I can't remember her name either.

Oranges_and_Pears: That's the question I wanted to get you guys asking, so great!


Neko (Guest), 01 Feb 2008 02:37 pm


Hmmm... Doesn't Giovanni look a little young on this page? Other than that, it looks nice. :)


Vye Brante, 02 Feb 2008 01:44 am

Yeah . . .
That bothered me too. Part of it is that I drew his face a tad skinny. Other than that, I wasn't sure how to make him older. Blaine looks too young a lot too. I haven't figured out how to tweak them just yet. Hopefully I will soon yet.

But thanks!


Hanzinator, 02 Feb 2008 01:50 pm


Haunted evil backstory of death!!


Vye Brante, 03 Feb 2008 09:22 am

Heh heh.
Sure, thank you!


Eloweasel (Guest), 04 Feb 2008 12:50 am


I think large, squareish chins make characters look older?

Not too sure, I draw animals and strange mutations of animals, so they... Don't really age... I mean, Giovanni is a little to young to have wrinkles... Right?


Vye Brante, 04 Feb 2008 01:24 pm

Yeah . . .
Probably not wrinkles just yet. (Even if he did, they'd be drawn horribly.)

. . . Huh. He did have a square-er chin when I drew it. I think I curved it when I inked it though. Whoops.


Oranges_and_Pears, 05 Feb 2008 05:14 am


I would give his gray streaks in his hair and a dounle chin. Then he would look older.


Vye Brante, 05 Feb 2008 02:44 pm

Almost too old . . .
He's actually in pretty good shape so he shouldn't look too old. And I don't know how old he's supposed to be. I don't know about the gray hair . . . maybe later.


Blazekin Master, 15 Feb 2008 04:53 pm

Gonna get good
I have a feeling this is gonna get really good, really quick.


Vye Brante, 18 Feb 2008 12:38 pm

I hope so.
I hope you're right. Let's just see if I can get the next page done.


amymist, 04 Jun 2008 04:27 pm


Gahh! CELABI! I DID SEEDED YOU BEFORE!!! Okay I'm on your forum right now to. Is that like obssesion? Eh well, I don't care.


spudwalt (Guest), 12 Dec 2008 04:00 pm

Giovanni
From all the pictures I've seen of Giovanni (both in the anime and the games), I think he's supposed to have lines on either side of his mouth. Maybe he looks younger here because he's missing them.


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